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Spent today waiting for my supervisor to get back to me on my revisions based on her suggestions (in case you're wondering, she was happy with most of my corrections, so as long as she gets back to me soonish I'm on track and all is well) So, to fill in time I:

• napped
  
• watched "Jersey Girl" (odd mix of sentiment and crassness, but watchably mediocre)
  
• Redid all the text on those ACOS pages with handwritten text
  

I don't expect people to reread them all, but look at the difference: Here's the original page 4 and here's the new version. Well, I'm proud of it anyway. And yes, they're a bit small now. Eh.

Oh, and can people tell what's going on in the new version of the Chapter 1 title page?